I like the bright blue sweater that contrasts with the pink background. I would love to see a bit more weaving between the letters and your skeleton and person because it seems flat and had no depth.
I love your logo sketches and it looks like you've got some very good ideas. I especially like the wave in the upper right hand corner! It represents what you are 'selling' very well.
Your logos all look very good, i enjoy the the second one up on the left, where you have the word run long with lines. I think that the typography on that logo is very nice.
I like how dynamic you were able to make that middle photo. It really adds to the project to do something like that. Also how you chose to overlap the models. Good Job.
The Foliage Poster is beautiful. I love the way the octopus weaves into the word legend and creates such an amazing focus point. It matches perfectly with your brand as well. Brilliant job!
I enjoy the detail that is in the skeleton, this is a great piece. I also think that the center line separating your letters is a nice touch!
ReplyDeleteI like the bright blue sweater that contrasts with the pink background. I would love to see a bit more weaving between the letters and your skeleton and person because it seems flat and had no depth.
ReplyDeleteI love your moodboard! I think it has some great design concepts that will for sure help you out later in the class.
ReplyDeleteMood board - I love your choice for designs/styles. The typography examples are also really cool.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the colors in your mood board, I think you're going to have a good time with the projects to come, lots of color choices.
ReplyDeleteI really like your mood board! The examples of typography and different elements that you have on it make it very interesting to look at!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of tribal style clothing. Your moodboard exenuates that idea very well. Can't wait to see what comes out of it. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteLogo sketch: I love the upper right one! I love the idea of the wave, it fits your brand well!
ReplyDeleteI love your logo sketches and it looks like you've got some very good ideas. I especially like the wave in the upper right hand corner! It represents what you are 'selling' very well.
ReplyDeleteyour writing is incredible! that look like finished products! you're definitely on the right track!
ReplyDeleteComposite Images: They all look great! Edges look very natural.
ReplyDeleteYour logos all look very good, i enjoy the the second one up on the left, where you have the word run long with lines. I think that the typography on that logo is very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe middle photo of your composites is really good, I love the feel of it. I think you chose a really good filter.
ReplyDeleteI like how dynamic you were able to make that middle photo. It really adds to the project to do something like that. Also how you chose to overlap the models. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteWeaving Poster: This is so cool! Love how the geo-shapes are making it really look like Native American face paint and clothing design.
ReplyDeleteI love how you put that transparent triangle over her face. It gives the poster a tribal feel that fits in perfectly with your brand!
ReplyDeleteYou're weaving looks very well put together, i like how you weaved the hair throughout, very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThe Foliage Poster is beautiful. I love the way the octopus weaves into the word legend and creates such an amazing focus point. It matches perfectly with your brand as well. Brilliant job!
ReplyDeleteYour weaving poster is awesome! I love how creative your different shapes are! The weaving of the hair and shapes is very well done! So creative!
ReplyDeleteI love your Foliage poster! I love the contrast between the color and the black and white. It looks really great!
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